Evaluation Research Report:
The purpose of this research study was to
determine how the video "Packrat" might be improved. I used the comments of two focus groups
to gauge audience reaction to the video. It was my hope to find commonalities
within the group responses that could be applied to a revision of the
project. By utilizing these
audience suggestions, I believe that the new version of the video will remain
true to the intent of the piece while being more responsive to the expectations
of the targeted audience.
QUESTIONS AND QUESTIONING PROCEDURES
In
developing the questions, we first watched the video and discussed what kinds
of questions would achieve our goal of getting feedback to improve the video.
We then threw out a bunch of questions and wrote them up. We discussed how many
questions to ask and thought about the length of time each could take. We discussed the relevance of the
questions and we edited them. We wound up with eleven questions for the first
group and added two additional questions and removed one for the second group.
Because
one of the groups was contacted by mail, questionnaires were the only way to
accomplish the goal. In the second
group the opportunity arose to get more specific feedback in person.
All
of the questions are aimed at determining story and structure. They go from
broad to specific. They are not numbered in order to prevent the response of
mentally ranking them and creating relationships between them.
SELECTION OF PARTICIPANTS
Intended audiences were:
-People who hoard and use support groups on the web or
in person
-Users of the Obsessive Compulsive Foundation web site
-Attendees of the annual Obsessive Compulsive
Foundation conference.
-Educators and students in media ethics, documentary
theory, or psychology
-Anyone who comes into contact with a person who
compulsively hoards
I will first state that videos and questionnaires have
been distributed to all of these groups, but many are unable to respond within
the timeframe to be included in this analysis. The groups that will be included
in this analysis fall under the categories ÒEducators and students in media
ethics, documentary theory, or psychologyÓ and ÒAnyone who comes into contact
with a person who compulsively hoards.Ó
To recruit educators and students, we used 'The List'
and 'On Location' techniques. That is, we recruited Emerson College graduate
students and faculty from the pool
we had readily available at the college. While there was no official
"list" we knew our primary recruits attended Emerson. We also
recruited their friends outside the organization by using the 'Snowball
Sample', and having participants bring friends along.
The second group is the group of participants who
where queried when they watched the video in accordance with the projectÕs Human Subjects Review
proposal. This meant we did
not use a ÔSingle-Category DesignÕ which IÕll come back to in the section on
Limitations.
THE
INTERVIEW ENVIRONMENT
The
interview environment was not consistent between the two focus groups. One was
conducted in a school classroom with seats arranged as in an auditorium which
probably did not foster as much discussion as it could have. The moderator
stood in front of the group. Participants did not learn each otherÕs names.
The
second group consisted of individual survey questionnaires filled out in
participantsÕ homes.
I would call both scenarios comfortable but structured
by the questions themselves.
HOW
THE INTERVIEW WAS ACTUALLY CARRIED OUT
For the first group, questionnaires were handed out
prior to viewing the video. At the end of the video, specific faculty members
responded verbally while others in the group filled out questionnaires, then
participated verbally. There was some opportunity to query the viewers further.
For the second group, questionnaires were provided in
advance as well. There was some opportunity for discussion and clarification in
the form of phone conversations. ItÕs impossible to say whether participantsÕ
in this group were hot or cold, or
hungry or thirsty, but I feel I can assume they were relatively physically
comfortable in their homes at the time of viewing.
The
first group yielded about 15 questionnaires with discussion. The second group resulted in closer to
8 questionnaires at present.
ANALYSIS
PROCEDURES
There was no gauge of homogeneity or screening, and no
pre-questionnaire. We did not ask income, age, gender, or ethnicity screening
questions.
Question
1: Does the story make sense?
This
question gets right to the heart of the matter. Respondents in both groups universally agreed that the story
was fragmented and needed focus. Characteristic responses were, ÒSeems like
multiple stories. Pick oneÓ and ÒIt doesnÕt tell a story as much as IÕd like,
but rather give more of a general overview.Ó Respondents in the first group
answered no to the question and respondents in the second group answered yes
but both groups qualified their answers in the same way.
Question
2: Whose story do you think it is?
Characteristic
responses went in two directions. Either people answered that it was about
Packratting in general or they thought it was about me and/or my father. Group
One was split three ways between my story, my fatherÕs story, and a general
exposition of the condition. ÒThe
filmmakerÕs story but I think it could be more defined.Ó In Group Two half the
people answered Òour story.Ó
Question 3: Do you understand who all the characters are and their relationships to each other? If not, where were you confused?
Everyone
in both groups ha d a problem with the lack of chyrons but felt that would fix
it. In Group One, two mentioned specifically a problem with the ÒexpertÓ
credibility. ÒSome I understood as your familyÑothers I had no idea where they
were coming from or what their expertise really is.Ó Everyone in this group had
problems identifying family members.
Question
4: Is it confusing in other ways?
In
Group One, two people left this blank. Two others said to cut the middle out
with the ÒMan on the StreetÓ style interviews. Others said it was choppy and disjointed and repetitious.
ÒRepeats repeats repeats.Ó In Group Two the answers were more varied.
Question
5: How do you feel about ÒPackratsÓ after watching the movie?
In
Group One the responses ranged from an analysis of the problem, to sympathy, to
intrigue. Some said they learned a
lot, such as Ò I learned that it is a condition that can be triggered by
medical complicationsÓ or ÒI learned a lot-but the movie feels ÔpackratÕedÕ LET
GO OF SOME OF YOUR FOOTAGE-THROW IT AWAY.Ó This is where the responses seemed to
get emotional and where a couple of people admitted they had tendencies. In
Group Two answers also ranged from what people learned, to sadness, to
sympathy.
Question
6: What do you thing was the main point of the movie?
This
question seemed easier to answer.
In Group One, four people thought it was about living with my Dad. Ten people thought it was about
ÒPackrattingÓ as an issue although some of those were still unsure. ÒI donÕt
really know. My guess is that the movie is trying to say that this is a really
hard, sad problem.Ó Others didnÕt answer. The general complexion of this
question was similar in the second group.
Question
7: What themes did you identify?
Here
is a breakdown of the numbers of identified themes.
Family
7
Mental
illness/health 5
No
themes 4
Loss
4
Repetition
across generations 4
OCD
3
Fear
of lack of control 2
Confusion
2
Isolation
2
Difficulties
it causes
How
it can occur
Hoarding
Social/economic
repercussion
Obsession
Experts/science
Depression
Perfectionism
Intelligence/education
Frustration
Cleaning
up
Question
8: Is there a part that seems
irrelevant?
It
seems to make sense to do a numerical breakdown here too.
Hallway
people 6
Repeated
ideas 3
Repeated
clips 2
Social
worker 2
Disaster
master 2
National
Geographic guy 2
All
experts 1
Question
9: Does it drag in any place and if so, where?
This
is a slightly different breakdown, but also useful to see in numbers
Hallway
people 3
Strokes
3
Disjointed, doesnÕt drag 3
No
answer 2
Repeated
ideas 2
Repeated
clips 2
Clinical
explanations 2
All
talk
Beginning
Question
10: What parts seem to work the best?
As
above, IÕll do it by the numbers and add some emotional responses this time.
Action.
ÒAction/animation is why they call it a ÒMOVie.Ó
Family/personal 7
Packrat
Environments 5
Kris
5 ÒI think you, YOU analyze your fatherÕs problem-makes for an interesting
story.Ó
Packrat
Man in workshop 4
Disaster
master 3
No
answer 3
Therapists
2
Stills
2
Question
11 (Group Two only): How did you feel about how you were represented in the
movie?
Expected
more than 20 seconds after 4 hours of interview
Accurately
I
look so upset!
This
question resulted in a lot of repetition about the lack of structure.
Question
12 (Group One only): Do you think this works as an educational piece?
Yes
8
Maybe 6 ÒI think you should focus on it as a
personal piece. Viewers will still get an education but it will be more
powerful.Ó
No 2
RECOMMENDATIONS
Based on the results here are some recommendations:
-Add
chyrons.
-Define
a topic or a story line and remove material extraneous to it.
Some
possibilities include:
á
A personal angle
á
A clinical angle
-Make
the story personal. This is a personal story and most if not all of the
clinical and third person stories are extraneous and should be removed.
-Concentrate
on the videomaker and her familyÕs stories.
LIMITATIONS
In doing only two focus groups I did
sacrifice homogeneity by comparing a group of participants to a group of
students/general audience. I was unable to achieve a 'Single-Category Design'.
As participants I would expect certain biases to surface in Group Two.
The two groups are also different sizes
and the questionnaires were distributed differently. Group Two is presently
half the size of Group One although questionnaires continue to dribble in.
Questionnaires from Group One were missing pages. I ran out of staples
and should have made an additional announcement to remind people there were
three. A bathroom break coincided with distribution of the questionnaires so
that would explain some of it. An additional problem with Group One was that
the faculty advisors spoke before the rest of the group filled out their
questionnaires, and I sometimes felt the group was parroting those faculty
members.